USING ONLINE FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT IN CLASS

Online formative assessment help me  achieve the potential benefits  of my learning experience, and also how good this tools are to create your job.  Mr. Hamon is my English teacher, without him none of us in this classroom wouldn't  know how to use the online formative assessment tools for our documents. I really appreciate the fact that,  my teacher though me how to use these type of  technology who was very helpful to me and also my class thank you.

PERSONAL LEARNING NETWORKS IN THE CLASS

My learning experience in the networks was wonderful for me because Mr. Hamon who is my English teacher taught me and the other classmate how to use it on any type of documents and files.
I had a great time learning it because I can go home or in my job and try to use it which make it more interesting for me.

GOOGLE DRIVE AND GOOGLE PLUS

I had great time using the google drive for my files and share it we the class, and  google plus for blogging . Before I 've never use this type of web but sense professor Hamon was using that type of tools for all his English class , he explain and show us how to use this new type of technology so every body's life will be easier in some point with any files or documents. What I can say, thank you professor Hamon for all the patience you give us so we can write our papers better, specially the APA.

MY EXPERIENCE IN THIS CLASS

My experience in this class was the best way to learn and understanding new web and know how to use the Wikipedia page, and also Mr. Hamon have a lots of patience he will aid us to knowledge the web and how to use it when we need to create a document or blogging with colleagues in the class. The vast practice that I had in this class was the Wikipedia article.

DEATH

Frequently we will ask why death exist in our life , why should we grieving so bad when some one passing ,we asking the meaning of this word ,who created this type of evil things that human can't never in they entire life to end it, only the one who created it is the one who can stop it. Death is similar with your sleep and also when the anesthesiologist inject the general anesthesia in to your body I really think it is the same.

DEATH

What is death? Death is something human in general cannot get use to it because you never ever will see or meet this person anymore in your entire life, that is why people grieving over they loss , when some body pass away meaning all his biological and living organisms stop. Death is a cessation connected with our body and mind, we really don't know when death is arriving ,it is the biggest mystery of everybody's life.

DOC2

Well, I am not done with my doc2 yet because I do need to correct a couple things and also to add my references which is from the library, the librarian lady who help me the research was absent the other night and another person from the library was trying to help me could not really because she told me that to come back to talk to the lady who help me the first time and she will help me with the references. what I can say is the librarians people are very nice and helpful and I really appreciated the fact that they trying to make us succeed .

MYTH IN POEMS

Myth in poem is the key to clarify the readers what type of expression the writer choose for his frictions and poems. Myth in a movie or poems can be untruth or truth depend on what type of frictions or poems the writer use.

MYTH IN MY LIFE

My myth will be every day we sleep and wake up to see another beautiful day ,and some times I will ask myself how it happens and how in the world GOD does it  ,for me it 's like magic which will amaze me every time in my life and that will be my myth in life hope some of you will understand my myth thanks.   Also I know we almost at the end of this class but you all been very helpful to me and I really do mean what I just say and  my wonderful teacher Mr. Hamon who really need our hand clap together for his patience, hard work with us and he make sure  that we understand what he wants and if we need help he will explain it over and over so nice of him thank you again.

EMILY, DICKINSON

Emily Dickinson was great writer born in 1830, she always had a sad face but nice figure Emily was always alone with no friend or visitor, she seldom leave her house mostly inside.Reverent Charles Wadsworth were Emily's best figure in her life, that is why her  poem was about him , she call him "my  closest earthly friend". no one really know if they relationship was real and romantic .  She first  met him on a trip to  Philadelphia. Charles stop by her house for a short times and left for the West Coast . Sense he left for the West Coast critics say that Emily had a rise heartsick flow over the years after his departure .

WIKI ARTICLE

Wiki article that I chose was Negros Speaks of Rivers it is a short poem by Langston Hughes great poem with lots of deep and profound experience with the slavery if any one can read his poem you will imagine the pain and the madness he endure before and you will have a better clarity of his poem.
wiki it 's a easy route for any one of us but over all our teacher give us the opportunity to have the experience and how to work it out. we do have an excellent teacher very good job Mr.Hamon.

NEGRO SPEAKS OF RIVERS

I chose this poem because it is short and interesting with  profound and deep words  by Langston Hughes. This is a great poem  to read and understand why the author chose this type of poem and why it so deep in his sol , demonstrated his madness inside by not saying anything to arm him but the way he wrote this poem call Negro Speaks of Rivers while riding the train to visit his dad and look out the window and from that moment crossing the Mississippi river with plenty of mud and can imagine and visualize all these music and song also people dancing and much more that when he realize that river symbolize his African American community and heritage. I love the way he put them together.

MYTH

Myths are based on tradition. Some may have factual origins, while others are completely fictional. we may think it  can be stories about heroes who are sons of gods . Myth is made- up story that explain the existence natural phenomenon  like why the rain come from the sky or why the thunder making lord noise, why we call it mother nature and on and on.
Myth and mythology are a group of people, like the Indians, Egyptians, Romains and others who are ancient cultures and religions.

A PERSON'S SYMBOL

What symbolize my contry is the flag every year on May 18th to celebrated the freedom of independent and how proud and happy every one of us are,  this is over all what symbolize it .

PSYCHOLOGICAL CRITICISM

Psychological criticism is a type of analyze where the reader can examine the narrator motivation and character. sometime it can be the psychology of the expression of the narrator by asking why he choose that particular story. Over all psychology can be a great tools for people because they can express their feeling and can be very emotional on the story they been reading.

CRITICAL PERSPECTIVES

Critical perspective is a formed of critical thinking to help people with their skill and also to teach them how to present ideas with logical and convincing writing so who ever going to read the article will have a clear and understanding otherwise it will be difficult.

ABOUT WOMEN WRITERS

About women writers in the eighteen century women was a discrete from the society because of the gender. Men was the one the society recognize and these women was writing poem, short story, fiction etc... But because women at this century had no powerful power over the society cause they are women no and  one really care about they writing. But in 1970 women sense than been discover by many people like organization, awards and many more so their message been all over the world because of the gender they been discriminated in a way so with a lot of effort and confidant they realize they dream as a women power.

WIKIPEDIA

I think that wikipedia is a great tools to write article but because it is my first time using it in this class I kind of afraid a little bad because wikipedia can kick me off if they don't like the article because i have to make sure whatever article that i writing fit . My concern will be can i created a good one article without been kick off? But i think it is very interesting to experience with the wikipedia web.

THE YELLOW WALLPAPER

Wikipedia said The yellow wallpaper was a short story and only had 6000 words and was publish in the 1892 by the new England post the writer name was Charlotte Perkins Gilman, she was a feminist among women health in the 19th century . She was hiding her journal so her husband John who is a physician could not see it but her husband confront her upstairs where she's been lock up and when families member will ask her husband about her condition he will tell them mental illness . she became very obsess with the color of the wall and also the smell of it the only thing that wiki don't mention is which house she been living but we know her husband rent a house for summer.

Figurative

Figurative in my favorite movie will be when they use those beautiful poem but at the same time they will use it in another tone in the same setting sometimes will mess with the scene of the movie because the audience will be confuse or will criticize .

Character in a story

 Character in the story we read are the greatest on the plot  because at the beginning  they give you the summary also protagonists will make it very interesting so the audience can ask for more. These character in those story are the one who will make and put the story wanting more for the audience, so they will use the tone, theme, so the audience or reader can enjoy it.

SYMBOLIZE ME

What symbolize me will be my student identification in school as a nursing student.
When I can go any where my car symbolize because ride.
symbolize me can be my cross around my neck so people will realize that am catholic.

THE CHRYSANTHEMUS

The protagonist use chrysanthemums in his story because of that pretty young women who are very bless with nature with flowers blooming but still had some big issues in her personal life. She married a man and was not the kind of life expected because she feel very trapped in this relationship.

"THE FALL OF THE HOUSE OF USHER

The theme of poes' the fall of the house of Usher was very scary because he live on a creepy house with his family and was mental so the narrator use some type of tone and theme to describe it so the reader can be interesting about the story.

REVELATION

"Revelation" use in Flannery O'Connor's story was some kind of message from God she reveled seeing revelation  through those eyes and can tell you what she saw like telling him to go to hell by using a soft voice before passing away. She was a good believing Christian .

The Yellow Wallpaper

Charlotte Perkins Gilman ( July 3, 1860- August 17, 1935) was a prominent feminist , sociologist and also write short stories . Charlotte was represent California has a delegate, she was the type of women who will not afraid to do or said anything she was an activist and had a lot of support by others she so devoted on what she love that also was he reason why she decided to write short stories and poem because of her different tasks she accomplish all her life.

That will be the article for my doc1.

Critical writing

Critical writing is a feedback where we suppose to focus on when we writing a paragraph so we can engage critical sources so we can improve our level of critic to demonstrated  a clear and a good argument.

Wikipedia Topic

I learn about Wikipedia topic that you can edit story an make sure to enter a strong and interesting topic so the reader won't kick you out from wiki.  I have to make sure that I give  them a good reliable references also sources and the link of my topic.

THE YELLOW WALL-PAPER

I choose the Yellow Wall-Paper for my Wikipedia well I read about the story and it seem to be very interesting and also mystery about a women who seem to be going on a severe depression and a n abusive husband .

Protagonist

Protagonist in my favorite movie is when Julia Roberts was doing prostitution for a living and after working with that rich  men for a couple day her life turn around and the rich men fall in love with her and that is where the dream started

About me

My name is Marie and i am in my 40's and two beautiful kids my goals is to become a very good nurse so my family will have a better way of living because like anyone knows pay checks by pay checks is very hard to live in.

Learned and experience in the class

My experience in the class was fantastic i had a chance to discover a lot about technology my teacher learne me how to use different web site and how it is very helpful for me and i can say that my classmate was wonderful to me and help me when i had difficuties to get to the web and thank them a lot and mostly my teacher Hamon who really show us the good tools and how to use it all on your reseach and documents

Google plus in class

Google Plus is just now getting more attention from web searchers – it’s time for you to take advantage of this no-cost social media platform that’s user-friendly, quick to set up, and full of features and benefits that we’ll show you in this online class. Because it’s a Google product, it’s fully supported and has bells and whistles to highlight different types of content and events your organization creates to raise awareness among your target audience. I had a great time using google plus with my English teacher his the one who make it possible for every one.

Wiki in class

Wiki can make you  share docs, media, and PFD files on your classroom wikican be used as a portal for all your lessons .Using the discussion feature in Wikis, You can connect with your classmate give them extra help. Teachers can expand their teaching beyond the classroom walls
Teacher Hamon can use Wiki to share presentations with our the class
Make it a class project to collaboratively write a reference book that others can use.
Post assignments and study guides on your Wiki for the class to work on
Get your class to create summary pages on every unit they learn and this wiki is the best and i love to be on it.

Online, formative assements in class

The project was a collaborative one, involving two university-based researchers and a team of teacher-researchers. The aims were to build on basic research already carried out by the university researchers by investigating the issues from a more practical and applied perspective; consider how a collaborative action research approach to the professional development of teachers might be used to bring about changes in classroom assessment practices; and provide a basis for the further development and refinement of theory on formative assessment. The article reports on changes in classroom practice, particularly involving the clarification and communication of assessment criteria to pupils, and on the processes by which this came about.

Personal learning networks in the class

Personal learning networks help me figure it out wit my classmate by giving me idea of what i need to improve on my writing and also to really know my classmate regarding any kind of comments that can help me with my next doc thank you for all your feedback .

Google drive in class

Google drive is the best because i am not a master on the computer but when my teacher explain to me about google drive and how google drive can help you with sharing documents and also your classmate can view it and comment about it i was amaze about and a very good experience for me

Using blogging in class

Blogging opens up the possibilities of audience in new ways. When students are writing or publishing for an audience other the teacher, it impacts how they view what they are doing and the intrinsic motivation they have.
Students love seeing their work on the Internet and adore getting comments from people. It motivates them to write as it gives them an audience that is real. The blog opens up a whole new world of people who can offer encouragement and feedback. over all my teacher really give me the good knowledge to use these blog and i love it.

Big Data on your life

Knowing block-by-block pollution levels can help families choose places to live, and noise data puts teeth in long-neglected noise ordinances so the laws can monitor the pollution in the cities

Networks in College

Personal learning networks in college is a team who will make it real and validity, encouragement and a hand to grasp, hold, manipulate so that this why the team is there to help the student to grasp

Statistic that mislead

You act as if statistics is all seeing magic and the not seen parts are sexism and patriarchy. But there are still a lot of things that could explain the gap we cannot measure. Women not being as good at negotiating raises as men? Who knows?

Peer view

Peer review is a tool used by regulatory decision makers to ensure the accuracy and appropriateness of these documents. Peer review adds a degree of authority and comfort to often complex scientific and technical issues. Peer review also strengthens the final assessments produced by agencies. These are important objectives in pursuing thorough and thoughtful rulemakings.
when my document was reviewed i was affraid but when you think about it is not so bad at all you get feedback so you can get better on you next document .

Rogerian Argument

Most of us tend to resist change and are threatened by ideas that challenge what we believe. Also, most of us dislike being told what to do and how to think, so even if our brains tell us to agree, our emotions (and egos) tell us to shut down and ignore what we are hearing. A male chauvinist who believes that women are intellectually inferior to men will be unlikely to listen to your argument that women are as intelligent as men.

Poor/ Good evidence

It is not is a rule which requires that the best witness be called or the best proof be offered witness be called or the best proof be offered.It is not is a rule which requires that the best witness be called or the best proof be offered at trial. The application of the best evidence rule does not exclude evidence based on any type of qualitative assessment of the evidence as poor, good, better or best. Its only aim is to insure accuracy of evidence under the premise that proof of the contents of a document should ordinarily come from the document itself.

Nursing in USA

My concern about nursing in USA is that the healthcare organization doesn't really care or pretend to be care, because all those new grad fresh from school and apply for jobs and get turn down because they don't have any work experiences and even they explain on the application that they just pass the board  and that will be they first experience they still not getting the job so that is the reason why so many shortage and also because they will travel over sea in the Caribbean which is very sad to imagine that patients really need those help specially when they have a condition. 

skeptical evidence

I do like the fact that when a colleague review and give you feedback about your document it is very good to know that is an evidence for the teacher because he may  think that no classmate review the document so teacher will found it skeptical. But because the colleague did review it and comment about it that will be evidence.

Evidence

A set of thing helpful in forming a conclusion or judgment let's said the police went to a crime scene and collect a few thing that will sound like they found some evidence at the crime scene, because without it the judge will be skeptical about the crime.

Nursing Shortage world health organization

In most countries in the whole world there is a shortage of nursing it look like an acute as in the developing world. In every country the story is the same they don't have enough nurses, rich or poor because even the developing country cannot compete with a better pay,  better professional development.
The United States expected to have a shortage of 1 million nurses by 2020, the reporter try to argues for the public increasing the production of nurses and improve the workforce management to stimulate retention. Health care is the most solid career industry offer because of the shortage nursing across the world.

How HIV enter in society

this particular infection will affect your immune system ,so the body weaken and develops AIDS.
Well many theories were puzzle about this infection because the researcher think it is from monkeys which also came from gays, and through polio vaccine. But nobody really knows how HIV enter the society until we realize people was getting this inexplicable symptoms more frequent.

Wage and Hour Laws

The Fair Labor Standards Act establishes minimum wage, overtime, and record-keeping requirements for most public and private employers. This program is only for employees not for contractors, because the courts generally conduct a specific inquire this issue and consider five factors to determine whether an independent contractor is in reality an employee.
Who sets the worker's hour, provides tools and working materials, uniform, transportation, expenses, etc.

ILLOGICAL THINKING

My illogical about different group of people we be i have been winning the lottery every week some group of people will think that is illogical that every week i have been a winner but the other group will find it logical because they will think that maybe she is a lucky person and why not.
But you know what nothing these group of people who think that i am illogical no matter what they will said or think won't convence me otherwise.

Peer evaluation

Peer evaluation for me is like doing the same kind of job with my co-workers in a different kind of way. Because in reality i will do my job more carefully than my co workers.

Logical Fallacies

Logical fallacies is a type of personel attack specially when your write a paper try to found a good argument because the readers will see if your argument are real, remember when a claim is a statement a writer wants the reader to accepted. we don't want to confuse our readers because real things can distract the readers, example a panguin is black and white ,well whish is years ago tv was black and white so these panguins are old black and white.

MY THESIS

How can I found my thesis? First I will see what kind of subject or presentation I have to do and than will start on my research papers on the websites or the right book at the library.
when starting to read or searching I will try to see which information is the most likely to be feat gather exactly the important point of view so my audience will want  or very intense to see or hear more .  

Police violence

January 26th,2015

Police violence

My opinion about these police officer is sometimes they will follow the rules  and try to be human. I am against police violence i don't believe that because an officer is considered to be a "police officer" that there are entitled to attack , beat, harm or kill us. i feel police is train to defuse any situation and that violence is the last thing we will imagine because in reality police officer suppose to protect us ,save us in any circumstance lets think for a moment in young age like 3 years old and up we always thinking these police officer were like super hero, god saver, to become like theme event on Halloween we dress like them because we will never though they will become  our biggest enemy . well what they will need to do is having these police academy to ask for more fundraising so they will train them better with no brutality or force specially on those innocent people they going to make the society in rage and maybe becoming a war .citizen can organize they own way of how to raise their voices and how to resist in this situation so the authority can understanding them and change their way of treating people badly or roughly.

Illegal Meat made in a factory

when  someone here illegal meat you telling yourself my dear lord what possibly the authority mean by that?
I can said sometimes the human mind can think differently from normal one but think about it they are trying to destroy the world with those fake meat made with god know imagine that you are spending an food and realizing this kind of food will destroy your health and none only yours  but family and others. well can we see how the name of money can be evil in some human head "wow".

Florida law think everybody is in vacation

the law in Florida put every body in the same boat ,because people come from north or international to visit Florida especially Miami ,Orlando . So the government put us in a very expensive state to live, by thinking we all vacationing in this state.